Face the music

Sep 17, 2014 05:59

" A birthday is a great day for a new beginning ". Said the thinking balloon as Ivy got off the train and onto the platform. A slight breeze caressed her face, wiping off the tiredness of a one and half day journey, rejuvenating her briefly.She turned around to see if there were any coolie's around to help her carry the two grossly out-of-shape and ( Read more... )

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bleodswean September 18 2014, 14:56:25 UTC
Yikes!!! I liked the way you used her music throughout!

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eternal_ot September 18 2014, 15:20:29 UTC
Whoa! Didn't see that coming..way to go girl...Good Work..well written!

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rayaso September 18 2014, 19:22:28 UTC
I did not see that end coming! Sam certainly deserved his penectomy. I really enjoyed how you used the music. Ivy is raped and brutalized, but I'm glad she had some measure of revenge and that she did not let Mr. Kumar and Sam defeat her.

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