jolie piece. je vous donne 16 / 20. mais faites attention au style ("frequent quite frequently") et aux lourdeurs ("i felt detached, observant, melancholy, but still amused with the world around me, and mysterious" pour "like a french lover after his escapade")!
i like you. i like your cinematic mode. i like reading it because it's like reading how my brain sees if you wrote it down. like "the middle stories" by shelia heti.
Hell yes it kicks ass! I saw them perform in SF and they kicked even more ass (and much more vigorously, I might add). My favorite track is #8. I listen, I float!
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mais faites attention au style ("frequent quite frequently") et aux lourdeurs ("i felt detached, observant, melancholy, but still amused with the world around me, and mysterious" pour "like a french lover after his escapade")!
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i'm not sure about "a french lover after his escapade." more like. a man just released from prison after a long sentence.
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ah, so, perhaps, a "french lover just before his escapade, awaiting the object of his lust/desire"?
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fortunately, my wit and charisma have fooled everyone.
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but i'd be lying.
i barely manage to read what i have to. for the most part, reading for pleasure lost its charm for me long ago.
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happy 25 years and 7 months birthday to us! :D
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i must confess that i'm not familiar with "the middle stories."
so many texts, so little time.
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I saw them perform in SF and they kicked even more ass (and much more vigorously, I might add). My favorite track is #8. I listen, I float!
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if so: i was glad to see you updated your online journal recently after a period of silence.
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