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mistresslegato

Not that anyone even reads this

Aug 26, 2009 10:32

Because nobody comments 98% of the time, but I would really like some critique on Morrigan! (The one with the giant tits, if you didn't know.)

Something about her seems off, but I just can't put my finger on it!

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darkstalkers, lillith, critique, morrigan

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mistresslegato August 26 2009, 18:43:31 UTC

Thank you dear <3

I try to comment, but I get so many messages, too!

I will try fudging her back around a bit.

octopodpie August 27 2009, 02:06:18 UTC

I think her shoulders aren't broad enough. Like if I imagine her arms falling at her sides, I think they wouldn't be far enough away from her body?

greenpanda August 28 2009, 20:32:51 UTC

Her shoulders actually look fine to me, since they are pulled up, they wouldn't be in the same place if they were resting.

Her torso looks a bit too long. It would make the rest of her look more proportional if you shortened her body a bit.

Also, if she has her arms up, her breasts would be pulled up a little and not fall so far like this.

Her thigh (furthest leg) looks a little thin since her knee's bent. You wouldn't see her butt like this, you have this part in a different perspective than the rest of her. This part is kind of at a lower view perspective while the rest of her is straight on. It would just be her "pubic mound" (as my boy put it) and her thigh would continue behind that and the leg in the forefront.

mistresslegato August 29 2009, 22:03:05 UTC

You're right about the boobies! I just was wondering how "pulled up" they'd have to look being as big as they are! I should go google some porn stars, or something XD

AAAH, you're right about the leg/butt/pubic mound thing. I need to look up a good reference because I also didn't think her butt would show, but it looks a bit weird when you draw it straight back. I'm gonna lie some tracing paper on top and redo it. Will you crit it again if I still need help? She's giving me a hard time and you've been most helpful, my lovely rabbit!

greenpanda August 29 2009, 22:40:47 UTC

the bottom curver of her breast in the forefront would probably hit that curve just above on her back. The breast behind it would be a tad higher because of perspective.

well, i'm assuming the bottom of her thigh wouldn't just be straight. there might be a little curve, but you'd only be able to see a bit of it before it gets hidden.

of course! i'm always here to help :)