My Entry - Illusion of Youth

[mistresssafire]

 Below  in the LJ cut is the entry I mentioned. The Prompt was Transient Beauty. I hope you all like it
Ilusion Of Youth

By Mistress Safire

She sat before her mirror, the small makeup pots, tubes and jars lined up like soldiers on a child’s play
 table.   A wry smile crossed her lips as she picked up the crème that would smooth the wrinkles of age away

Comments

[priestess_skye]

this is wonderful. very lovely. you did an excellent job with the pormpt and with the writing, and it's probably better than your fanfiction because you're not constrained by that which RT outlines for us. Instead you can venture out on your own without restraints

[piratequeen0405]

Gorgeous prose! Congrats on stepping outside the safety zone.

[tallymark]

This is a lovely coming to terms with age...and the understanding that youth and beauty are not the same thing, and one doesn't have to have the first to have the second. Well done!

[thepasswordis]

don't be nervous. thats the beauty of being anonymous. *sigh*.

you write very well by the way.