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mithen

The Man Who Falls (4/10)

Feb 27, 2011 19:53

Title: The Man Who Falls (4/10)

Pairing/Characters: Clark/Bruce, Alfred Pennyworth, Lucius Fox, Lois Lane, Cat Grant, Perry White, Jim Gordon, Harleen Quinzel
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None needed
Continuity: The Dark Knight/Superman Returns crossover; a continuation of Leap of Faith.
Word Count: 4000Summary: Clark Kent arrives in Gotham after ( Read more... )

series: leap of faith, ch: harley quinn, ch: clark kent, ch: perry white, ch: alfred pennyworth, ch: cat grant, ch: bruce wayne, p: clark/bruce, ch: lois lane, ch: jim gordon, ch: lucius fox

Comments 72

gogglehead84 February 27 2011, 11:32:25 UTC

ehhhhhh? eh? You left it there!? D: Bruce!!!

mithen February 27 2011, 14:54:13 UTC

Sometimes you just gotta embrace the cliffhanger! :D *rubs hands together* Hm, I'd better not wait toooo long between chapters now...

dshael February 27 2011, 12:32:46 UTC

eep!

mithen February 27 2011, 14:54:37 UTC

Ha! Your icon! :D Spock is appalled!

dshael February 27 2011, 15:07:34 UTC

AND SO AM I. ;)

mithen February 27 2011, 15:25:53 UTC

Eeek! *panics and runs off to work on the next chapter* ;)

angelinachaser7 February 27 2011, 12:58:09 UTC

Well that was an interesting ending. I loved the one liners from Alfred and Perry, I found them quite humorous.

Also Bruce's problem solving skills are one of a kind too, "Alfred shook his head, looking down at the sheets. "Master Wayne, this can't continue. It breaks my heart to see this." He reached down and touched the red stains, stark against the white.

Bruce finished sashing his robe slowly. "You know, you have a point, Alfred."

"I do?"

"Yes." Bruce looked over his shoulder at the butler. "Go out and buy a few sets of black sheets today, would you?"
That last line cracked me up.

After that ending, the next chapter should be good :D

mithen February 27 2011, 14:56:44 UTC

Also Bruce's problem solving skills are one of a kind too.

He is nothing if not pragmatic, isn't he? If it bothers you, we shall take proactive steps! :)

After that ending, the next chapter should be good :D

Clark and Bruce are going to have to have a Talk. Well, if Bruce survives. *coughs*

stalinglim February 27 2011, 13:04:18 UTC

*gasps!*

noooooes!

mithen February 27 2011, 14:57:26 UTC

I gave in to the Evil Cliffhanger Temptation, I confess it! :D

stalinglim February 27 2011, 15:01:13 UTC

SO MEAN TO US.

No loves us, no precious.

minyandu February 27 2011, 14:13:34 UTC

*jaw drop*
I know this is just cliff hanger but damn you make it sound so real. D:

mithen February 27 2011, 14:58:12 UTC

*grin* I'm glad it works! I'd like to think I was able to get well into Clark's POV for it...

minyandu February 28 2011, 00:22:14 UTC

You get into Clark's POV very well, especially how he see Bruce's self-torture without knowing his other identity.

mithen March 2 2011, 12:12:32 UTC

Thanks! It's a really hard thing to do sometimes--I find it difficult to remember what Clark knows and doesn't know, lol...