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[mito10]

LOL~ my very first KHR fanfiction so it'll be short~ i'll wait for the comment~ and please check my bad grammar it'll help me a lot~!

Heaven and Hell -Prologue-
Mukuro version

Ah... i can't feel any of my body? it's all go numb, my vision was blur but for certain i hear someone call me...
"MUKURO! MUKURO!"
someone call my name so hard who's that? who is

Comments

[bt_tara]

I just realized that I basically beta read your entire fic. >_

[mito10]

EH? i'm sorry!! >.< thanks for beta it!! >.< i love you!! *Study english again*

[bt_tara]

Eh, no problem. I wanted to explain the corrections on there, but there was a limit to how much I could type. ^_^;

Here are some explanations:

- "I" if referring to one's self is always capitalized. Example: My father accidentally burnt my homework and now I have to do it again.
- Names are always capitalized that includes names of locations too. Example: John, Jack, and Jessie want to visit countries like Germany, Italy, China, Japan, and Mexico.
- "It's" is a short form of "it is", while "its" means that "it owns or possesses something" Example: It's a nice day today. Although my dog is not feeling well, right now. It lost its babies.

[mito10]

*nods* thanks!! u sure help me a lot~! and is there any grammar mistake maybe? :3