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blaidd_drwg January 22 2011, 10:14:39 UTC
Loving this!

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mitsuruaki January 22 2011, 10:28:39 UTC
Good! Hope you like the rest! :D

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nathcoelho January 22 2011, 18:30:08 UTC
hummmmmmmmm... very interesting how Sherlock is reacting to john! =D
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*going to next part*

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mitsuruaki January 23 2011, 00:07:49 UTC
*taps chin thoughtfully* Onward, onward!

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days_of_storm January 22 2011, 21:02:01 UTC
ohhh, very promising chapter...off to read the next one :)

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mitsuruaki January 23 2011, 00:08:34 UTC
Thankies! It only gets better from here, lol.

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cinderbella333 January 24 2011, 00:39:23 UTC
Oh wow, this is just amazingly good. Incredibly in-character. Well-plotted. And the emotions. You've caught the physicality of the emotions so vividly that I am pulled in and feel them as the reader. Great piece. Reading on.

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mitsuruaki January 24 2011, 01:05:05 UTC
Oh god, I obsess over characterization; I try so hard. So hearing I did well means a lot to me. XD

Thank you! I like knowing my work impacts people!

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tehomet January 25 2011, 01:28:46 UTC
This is awesome! Off to part two...

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mitsuruaki January 25 2011, 01:35:08 UTC
Thankies! Hope you like! :D

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