fic: Oh Macca

Dec 02, 2009 20:12

Title: Oh Macca
Author: mittenlover
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Language
Pairing: John/Paul

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klphillips56 December 7 2009, 03:02:16 UTC
Aww I really like this. It's short but I think it's really pretty. I love when they are possessive of eachother.

"But you do belong to me, right? Not her, right?"
I 'awwwwww'ed at that.

"Please don't leave. I'm trying, I'm trying so damn hard to keep us together, can't you guys see, I want you guys to still be here. I need you guys."
That made me want to cry. It's beautiful.

Btw, sorry this is kinda late. I don't hav a computer at home and because of snow, I haven't been able to use one at school since Wednesday.

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sofia_rock October 15 2010, 16:38:55 UTC
Thank you for this, really! It felt so real, terrific job!

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