Another First Make-Out

[mixedemotions00]

The end seems a little out of place to me, but I like the bit of humor in it... not sure what to do with it!Infinitesimal sensations

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[mcshutup]

Again, this seems like an open invitation for the reader to share in the nostalgia, comparing my memories to yours. Very pretty and sympathetic, but not personal or personalised. I understand that emotional distance is crucial to the sensuality, but I feel that everyone could write a poem conveying the same idea with equally as little detail.

Probably my personal favorite poem you've written, but not your best.