Fic: Family

[mixedstrategy]

Title: Family

Pairing/Characters: Ando Ryuu (BoTR) /Hayami Kaoru (Hayami-san to Yobareru Hi), appearances from other BoTR characters

Rating: Just a teeny bit of NC17

Disclaimer: I do not own any of them since they sold themselves to J&A over 10 years ago. I don't own the dramas either.

Word Count: ~ 2.5k

Warning: Un-betaed as usual. Too much of my Kaoru

Comments

[sugiex]

Ando, I remembered you were a bad yakuza debt collector too; so easily distracted that the guy ran away, no?

And +1 for shorty!ueda references XD LOL @ coffee machine and ando jabbing it. It's actually quite a funny thought and I want to see it XD

Ajskdjskla; Kaoru with bento box ♥♥♥ Like a loving wife ~ It's surprisingly how he wasn't the uke though!

And Kaoru decided that for once, logic was overrated.

*thumbs up*

Although I didn't watch either of the shows #guilty (I was wondering, who is Tanishi, Shuu and Hana [I think she is the mute girl, urm..yes?]) and how I had to replace Kaoru with Nakamaru and Ando with Ueda mentally, I enjoyed this fict a lot :3 /all flaily at 1:30AM like a psycho; Thank you for posting!

And yes, I was shocked that you're paper bag too :O How did you type a fict while translating and dealing with midterms? *claps* And I will keep my eyes peeled on you too on the next anon meme *suspicious at all MaruDa prompts/fulfills*

[mixedstrategy]

Haha but I think overall he was quite successful leh climb quite high in the organization lor :P

Don't we all love (or is it just the 2 of us DD:) making fun of his height, hehe. You know at first I wanted to write him dishing out a boxing pose when the machine started beeping at him, but I decided it would make him look toostupid, haha. Poking at it is cuter, somehow :DD

They (and me) judge according to height and intelligence /nods

Tanishi is Maruyama's character, Shuu is the kid in the gym and yeah Hana is girl, except she's deaf not mute. >__>; I kept typing Ueda instead of Ryuu like 10 times. My subconscious really doesn't like Ryuu, lol

Thank you so much for reading :DD I enjoy all of your fics :DD

I used like 5 whole hours to write it (the original version) T___T, and it was super unbalanced so I edited it (but it is still unbalanced, lol) I think I wrote it during the last day of recess week when I was damn sick of studying hehe. I thought it would have raised some red flags that I didn't type in caps on twitter that

[sugiex]

guilty for not watching so I have zero idea what happened, hmm..

I think it's just us ;_; I think Kuuya would be the one doing boxing poses at beeping machines, haha!

Eh, how did the main character end up in jail /does not comprehend. And opps, I apologize for mixing up her disabilities. I only briefly saw her signing / writing on paper. Cause Ryuu is such an asshole and your subconscious knows it 8D

You very 强 leh, last day still can type fanfic. I would be too stressed to do anything already. I was like, there's a Ryuu/Kaoru fict, should I let you know; should have suspected something :( I very upset that none of the JunDa prompts are fulfilled, damn! 转换路线 to JunDa please, thanks! #jundaiconforyou

[mixedstrategy]

I don't think you lose anything by not watching it anyway, it's not that great a show >__>

Why T___T Must be you influence me one :P While I think that Kuuya may be silly enough, he doesn't box, so I doubt he will instinctively go into a boxing stance, lol

Long story short Shuu tried to bomb his home down cos his abusive father tried to sell him away, but Tanishi intercepted him and told the police he was the one with the bomb. Yes Ryuu is such a asshole >__< Please get better characters next time! ;__:

Like i said I was very sick of studying by then. And there was still like 4 days till my midterms then I think? The most normal thing to do when no one is writing what you want to read is to write it yourself! /nods Eh I Junda very hard to get inspirations one leh >__>

p.s. next Sat what time do you prefer? :3

[racanai]

This is so sweet! I like Ando Ryuu and in my opinion you portrayed him perfectly!

The last paragrap had me all adkjffldskjsu! ^//^

[mixedstrategy]

Thanks so much for reading :))

I've always called Ryuu a 'no head no tail' character (sorry, it makes more sense in my native language), in the sense that he doesn't seem to have a background story and he doesn't exactly have a 'proper' ending either (but I guess it suits him, lol) so it was quite hard to portray him. In the end I made up my own tragic childhood story and I wasn't sure how well it would go and whether it would just make him seem ooc, so I'm really happy that you like my portrayal :DD

[racanai]

In my opinion it's a pity that Ando Ryuu was left quite shallow. But the scene where he fought the yakuzas for Shu's sake because he was sold to them by his father left the impression with me that maybe that was what happened to Ando in his childhood. But it could as well be possible that he was just mistreated by his parents like you wrote. Maybe the manga answers the wuestion, but honestly I don't want to read it. XD
However, you should write more fics including Ando! ^^

[chuckles0505]

I left an anon comment at the meme (guess which one ;D) but I'll comment again with my identity.
I really enjoyed reading this!
I liked how you developed Ryuu's character and cute Kaoru is cute <3

Thanks for writing and sharing :D

[mixedstrategy]

idk T___T /fails

I love Kaoru! Notice how much I went on and on about what a nice person he is 8DD

Thanks so much for reading! :))

[chuckles0505]

Mine's the 2nd anon comment (the one that starts with "This was so sweet <3") :)

Me too! He's just so freaking precious and adorable. Kaoru's my favorite Nakamaru drama character so far *__*

[starg8fan_liz]

Wonderful fic XD so sweet ^__^♥♥♥♥