Fic: Forever

[mixedstrategy]

Title: Forever
Pairing/Characters: TTL!Maruda, with some Junno action
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I obviously do not own the boys or the pv. If I did the bank would get a better name.
Word Count: 928 
Summary: Tatsuya visits the bank to see his boyfriend. 
Warning: Unbeta-ed! Read at your own risk.

Comments

[snowaltz]

Can't stop squealing, you're the first person who wrote TTL fic and I've been hoping someone would do tat :D

You should totally unlock this fic, I want to pimp it fufufu.

[mixedstrategy]

I might after I edit it again later haha :)

[sugiex]

You wrote a story!

The setting is really cute ヽ(*・ω・)ﾉ It explains why Ueda was so impatient when looking around ~

Is this what they call the seven-year-itch?

Oh Ueda, you're thinking too much >3 Have more faith in Maru!

And... you should totally make it longer! I want to read more elaborations though, haha! Like more about their date...

The story is cute ♥ But 928 words is really too short! T_T

[mixedstrategy]

Yes I wrote a story! (lol)

Seriously, throughout the whole pv I kept thinking "what is he doing here to begin with?!"

He's feeling insecure because he knows that there are hot guys like Kame and Junno (and Koki? lol) that are in Maru's bank all the time 8D

I'll erm think about it. How about you write me a fic about the couple tee first haha

[sugiex]

I read somewhere that apparently, Ueda is a NEET. I have no idea what he is doing at a bank though, lol.

Oh yes, this bank has too many hot guys. I want to be an employee no matter how bad the name of the bank sounds like =w="

Eh? My inspiration is still very scattered though! How about you drop me a prompt? :x

[mixedstrategy]

Yeah he's supposed to be (although he insist that he's just a youngster). He even joked that he might have been thinking of robbing the bank himself (lol)

Haha I can't imagine telling everyone that I work in Shine State Bank lol. For some reason Kame reminded me of a con man like Kurosagi haha

I don't have concrete thought about it either lol How about they were shopping and there was a 2-for-1 offer and stingy!Maru forces Ueda to get it haha

[omnomthing]

Ahh, that was really cute. This was your first time wriiting a KAT-TUN fic? Really? You did a great job. :D One little criticism, I noticed you had Uepi refer to Maru as "my boyfriend" A LOT especially in the beginning. It was just a little jarring to me while reading it, maybe you could find a substitute? Other than that, I liked it. :) I can't wait for the rest of the CM!

[mixedstrategy]

Thanks you reading! :) I will take note of that if I ever write anything again in the future :D

[omnomthing]

Definitely keep writing! I keep this quote in mind when I don't like my writing: "Whether or not you write well, write bravely." :)

[gagulan]

ME LIKING THIS!!!! So CUTE!!!
Especially this“I can’t believe that I have to queue up just to see my boyfriend.” Tatsuya muttered under his breath as he joined the queue at Shine State Bank.

[starg8fan_liz]

funny and cute >__<.