MYpoem, revised tell me wat you think

[mixerdemon]

The rise of sweat fades for a moment and a cool breeze approaches, Spanish Harlem is different but still the same, too many liquor stores give reminisce to an era of colonial dominance. Too many are ready to rob from their own people; I saw a politician’s message on a jeep, spilling a clear sequence of fake promises and underneath those twisted

Comments

[prdarkstar]

i really like the idea that we're just a steppin stone for those of our own who just want to be on top with power. and i like that the fact that children still play overrides all that

its very very good =)
thats what happens when you come to my house lol