The Untouched - Part Ten

[miyahearts]

Title:  The Untouched - Part Ten
Pairing:  Nichkhun/Wooyoung
Rating:  NC-17
Summary:  Nichkhun, Taecyeon, Junho and Chansung are soldiers trapped in a heinous world war against the evil Dragon King and the Dragon Army.  They have just lost a major battle and have retreated to a hideout only to be rescued and aided by a young, innocent boy from the

Comments

[poisoncheecks]

this is so sad... *sob..sob..*
im crying my eyes out reading this...hukkkk
that king is really a ass jerk, using wooyoung to has his own way of conquering the world...
will khun really let woo die for him?? it'll be really heart breaking if one of them die...
please no, dont ever separate them..TT^TT
its already sad to have wooyoung been locked up and tortured the whole time...
khun, please save woo..save the others too~~

[miyahearts]

ok ok... this won't be one of my normal endings... but don't worry, khun and woo will be together... i'm not going to say how just yet but... you shall see.

maybe woo will save khun :)

thanks for the comment hun!

[sonesful]

waaaahhhh so sad T.T

but woo wont die and neither will khun ;-)

unless your planning to be MEAN?! please dont be mean T.T

[miyahearts]

i'm not being mean... just trying to tell a story. i promise you'll love the ending. :)

[muciwoo]

no~ T-T i know everything gonna be ok,right?

please don't let them suffering again ;A;

[miyahearts]

just a little while longer love. just a little while longer.

btw, loooooove your default. i love when woobaby looks like that in contrast to the party boy look. anyways, thanks for the comment :)

[love_khunyoung]

omggggg.. This is so sad, Miya. >_<
I really wish Khun'll just shoot him right at that moment, coz the other guards have all their weapons down right? Once the king gone, Khun could free everyone right? Khun won't let Woo die right? Woo should use his magic power to makes all the guys sleep and take Khun out to get rid of the king and release the others and escape!! Hrrrrr... I can't think of how this gonna end happy yet, but I really do hope that u'd have a happy ending for them where both of them live happily ever after together. :) Thank u for ur update, Miya.

[miyahearts]

happily ever after... that is the intention. just wait and see, i promise it'll be good. i cried a little thinking about the last chapter. thanks for the comment hun!

[jawaher1991]

I do not want him to die.
T_T

[miyahearts]

:(

just hold on... you will see :)