Mistaken Identity (Chapter 3)

Apr 03, 2009 13:26

Kame tapped his fingers against the steering wheel. He truly did not know how to approach Jin. The man was really angered and hurt by what had transpired yesterday. He knows that he should have given the man to breathe and release his anger before approaching but the guilt is eating him. Instead of going to work, he cancelled all his meetings and ( Read more... )

fanfiction: mistaken identity, pairing : akame, # multi-chapter

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akamaru07 April 3 2009, 09:04:42 UTC
Hiya! I just stumbled upon this today. Guess the summary lured me in. Its a very interesting story that you have here although I think things were a little fast. You could have explored it a little more :D But I have to say you write very well. Keep it up! Will read your other fics :D

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miyukaii April 3 2009, 09:15:34 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting. :D When i started out the story, I was thinking of making it a little bit longer but I decided to make it shorter. I know that it was indeed kind of fast but I tried my best to explain in the scenes why jin forgave Kame easily and stuff. There are rooms for exploration but right now, i decided to let it be as it is. :D ♥

Randooom: your LJ username reminds me of Kiba. (From Naruto)

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phoenix_zeal April 3 2009, 09:23:28 UTC
*dead* Why do they keep getting interrupted? *whines* Why why why?
So Jin owns a company, huh? That wasn't expected. XD Awesome! ♥

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miyukaii April 3 2009, 09:25:48 UTC
Because the author is an evil woman who can't write smut to save her life. *gets shot* I can't think of anything else aside from him being a boss. :Dv So yeah, Jin and a company. Aww, thank you. *glomps*

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phoenix_zeal April 3 2009, 09:28:03 UTC
Everyone can write smut, trust me. XD *bricked* When I started out writing Akame fics, I promised myself that I would never ever write smut because I would totally fail at it... that plan didn't quite work out.

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miyukaii April 3 2009, 09:30:38 UTC
I already wrote a quite-PWP-oneshot and although people liked it, believe me, it took me a month or so to actually write that, but I shall do this final chapter quickly. ♥ Hey, you write awesome fics, with or without the smut. ♥ LOL.

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nihonjin_tensai April 3 2009, 10:01:51 UTC
*faints*

An hour later....

What a great chapter!! I can't believe I just finished your latest update! *cries*

I like their characters here! hehehe!!! very outspoken and...proud :D
love it~~ :)

pleaseupdate soon~ will be waiting for it!!

thank you very muchhh!!! *hugs*

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miyukaii April 3 2009, 11:44:23 UTC
Awww, don't cry dear. :)) Haha, the characters aremore different than the way I usually portray them. :D I will try to update soon, ♥ *hugs back*

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criminalscream April 3 2009, 11:00:31 UTC
As soon as I read Princess I knew it was Ryo xD

But why Turtle?

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miyukaii April 3 2009, 11:38:44 UTC
Well, Ueda is Ryo's princess. :D Jin is calling Kame, TURTLE, because in Japanese 'Kame' means 'turtle'. :D Thank you for reading and commenting. ♥

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jennishi April 3 2009, 13:12:05 UTC
Nice story! I am one of those AKAME fans. I really love your story it is so funny! Did you know how much I waited for this chapter? Thanks for a good story! Looking forward to your other project

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miyukaii April 3 2009, 13:17:30 UTC
I am an Akame fan too. ♥ I am trying to finish this first before I move on to my next project. ♥

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