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miyukaii

Mistaken Identity (Chapter 4)

Apr 05, 2009 19:28

Kame was quietly resting at the couch in Jin’s office, snuggling to its warmth while reading the book that Jin lent him two hours ago. The two were supposed to go out to dinner but Jin called at the last minute that he cannot come because apparently, there was a board meeting tomorrow morning and he had to make sure that the reports he was going to ( Read more... )

fanfiction: mistaken identity, pairing : akame, # multi-chapter

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lilazngrl11794 April 5 2009, 19:10:02 UTC

*braindead* (but in a very good way xD)
it's sad that the fic already ended :(
but i'm looking forward to your other fics ;)
thanks for sharing!

miyukaii April 6 2009, 01:21:04 UTC

I'll miss this baby as well, but I'm starting to write a couple of storiesfacepalms, Thank you for commenting.

dreamwatcher15 April 5 2009, 20:40:44 UTC

SWEET! <3<3<3<3<3
I so loved this! <3<3<3<3<3<3

miyukaii April 6 2009, 01:18:57 UTC

Aww, Thank you. ♥

mesu87foxchan April 5 2009, 21:39:38 UTC

oh.. so nice and adorable and cute and love.... lol

love it dear... keep it up!!!!

miyukaii April 6 2009, 01:18:14 UTC

Thank you, Glad you liked it. :D ♥

akillarian April 5 2009, 22:10:40 UTC

A nice ending to the story :)

Yay for a more carefree Kame. It's nice that Kame still tries to make up for his bad behaviour toward Jin. Bringing food to jin's office so they can eat together is a nice touch. No need to go to a fancy restaurant to be able to eat together.

miyukaii April 6 2009, 01:14:50 UTC

Thank you, :D

I tfelt that since this is a short story, I should still give space to the fact that Kame committed something wrong. They just can't get along all of a sudden without Kame feeling remorse for what happened. :D

Thank you for reading, commenting and supporting. ♥

camui_eiri April 6 2009, 00:53:33 UTC

sorry for just stumbling across this fic today. and while there indeed could be improvisation done to your writing, i must say that it's quite good as it is. I love you characterisation of kame and jin; as both seem very manly, instead of one being the "female" to the other, and i found that very fresh. seriously, it doesn't matter who bottoms, boys will always be boys, they have pride in themselves, and you portrayed that very brilliantly. good job.

Love, Eiri ^-^

miyukaii April 6 2009, 01:08:34 UTC

Thank you for commenting, ♥ I'm not yet a flawless writer and I see a lot of areas I can explore on in this story but I decided to make it short and precise as it is. Your comment and reactions are very much appreciated. Thank you.

♥