Fanfiction: His Place

Apr 15, 2009 20:30

Being uncomfortable isn’t the proper term to describe it when they first kissed. It was a spur of the moment type of kiss; they got too caught up with the atmosphere that they failed to see when they were already leaning closer; closing the little gap they had between them. Reality crashed down when they simultaneously felt soft pressure on their ( Read more... )

# one - shot, fanfiction : his place, pairing : akameda

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funkysparks April 15 2009, 13:15:32 UTC
OH MY HEART. D: You expressed Ueda's pain very well indeed.

I'm glad this has somewhat of a happy ending though~ ♥

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miyukaii April 15 2009, 13:18:13 UTC
Oh my, your heart. ♥ This was a quite hard piece to write but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

As for the happy ending, i was seriously contemplating on having Ueda commit suicide. LOL, Thank you.

*HUGSSQUISHESGLOMPS*

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funkysparks April 15 2009, 13:28:31 UTC
O.O Commit suicide? Okay, I'm doubly glad for the ending now. XD

*GLOMPSHUGGLESCUDDLES*

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miyukaii April 15 2009, 13:34:28 UTC
Yeahp, because like I told you in my explanation, this was a quite fucked up story. So it was rly a conflicting decision on what the ending should be. Happy or angsty. ♥

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phoenix_zeal April 15 2009, 13:28:24 UTC
You are totally awesome and amazing and omg I will love you forever for writing this! I had tears in my eyes but god... it was perfect. ♥

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miyukaii April 15 2009, 13:32:18 UTC
...Aww, Lexie. iloveyoutoo. Thank you. :D ♥ I really can't reply anything but a big, quite lonesome yet full of love, THANK YOU.

and some big, awesome, red ♥♥♥ Your comment really made me more confident in posting this.

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phoenix_zeal April 15 2009, 13:55:15 UTC
You should be totally confident in this! I don't usually read AkameDa (I have no idea why) but this just sucked me straight in. Why does that sound pervy to me? ♥♥♥

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miyukaii April 15 2009, 14:01:48 UTC
AkameDa reminds me of ItaSasuNaru. I dunno why but it does. LOL. Don't worry. It sounded a little bit pervy to me as well.

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hanny2luv April 15 2009, 13:35:35 UTC
You know, i always love akameda too.
And i love this fic.
It's like i can feel what Tat-chan's feel, because of the way u deliver the story.

Thanks for the fic. ^^

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miyukaii April 15 2009, 13:37:49 UTC
HANNY, MYGOODNESS GRACIOUS, *GLOMPS* I missed you, awesome. ♥ And i love the fact that we share the akameda love. LOL. And thank you for commenting, it rly helped me a lot.

:D

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hanny2luv April 15 2009, 13:53:22 UTC
I miss u too. *Hugs*

I don't know what happen with my ym but i can't open it and that's make me can't chat with anyone. Huhu.

Yeah, akameda is love, ne. (^_^)

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miyukaii April 15 2009, 13:58:43 UTC
Ohh, you should just create a new one so that we can talk. :D LOL. I rly missed you. ♥

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kirei_shinigami April 15 2009, 13:37:12 UTC
i feel so sorry for tat-chan...
he's torn
T-T
and kame and jin are both greedy

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miyukaii April 15 2009, 13:39:27 UTC
I feel sorry for him too. So I was really conflicted on the ending whether it should be happy or angsty. Hmm, I feel quite intrigued. What do you mean by greedy?

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kirei_shinigami April 16 2009, 01:50:55 UTC
greedy.
both of them want each other and still want tat-chan...

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miyukaii April 16 2009, 11:14:58 UTC
Aah, I see. Personally, I agree with you. Their characters in the story was a little bit of self centered.

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jesssan April 15 2009, 13:52:34 UTC
Omg!!This is soooo amazing!!
I LOVE IT (L)(L)
I dont really like the 'threesome' concept of a fic, but seriously this is just..LOVE

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miyukaii April 15 2009, 14:02:51 UTC
I'm glad that even if you're not rly having a good relationship with threesome concepts, you still read this fic. It made me really happy. ♥ Thank you.

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