Fanfiction: His Place

Apr 15, 2009 20:30

Being uncomfortable isn’t the proper term to describe it when they first kissed. It was a spur of the moment type of kiss; they got too caught up with the atmosphere that they failed to see when they were already leaning closer; closing the little gap they had between them. Reality crashed down when they simultaneously felt soft pressure on their ( Read more... )

# one - shot, fanfiction : his place, pairing : akameda

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kamesoul April 15 2009, 16:03:24 UTC
Akameda is sure the best!
thank you so much for this amazing so touching heartbreaking fic!
I cried smiled and felt happy! love this one from you!
I enjoyed reading it! and its really good!
please make more akameda it needs more love! <33
and p.s this *Because it’s okay for him to be breaking as long as Kame was happy* really broke my heart! I know how he feels! LOVE you tat-chan!

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miyukaii April 16 2009, 09:45:49 UTC
Thank you. I am really glad that readers are really taking this story well. ♥ If I have more inspirations then I will continue writing Akameda. But *facepalms* whenever I write something remotely related to Akameda, it turns out angsty. Why, oh why?

♥ All my love.

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allboutp April 15 2009, 17:03:21 UTC
okay, i dont know y, but somehow in the middle of reading this, i almost cry. it was getting much emo n i couldnt bear it *wipe my eyes*
the atmosphere r thrilling, as i read towards the end, i really hope that they will b together, the 3 of them, n thank God it came true! *hugs u tightly*
i lk the style, n the overflowing emo, u dont hv to change anything about it.
n i dont hv a bias feeling about 3some, coz somehow, love is comlicated. u cant choose who u want to fall in love with, ur heart will decide for u
thanks for the wonderful fic, as i was deeply immersed in it ^^
p/s:sorry for a long comment, cant stop myself huhu~

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miyukaii April 16 2009, 09:49:39 UTC
Long comments are always welcome. ♥ And even if I'm twisted and would rather be angsty all my writing life, I can never really stomach character deaths much so they just really have to get together.

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osmium26 April 15 2009, 17:04:30 UTC
it's long but it's worth reading...
i love it..
your so good..^-^
it made me sad for some reasons..
please write more akameda fics...
thanks for sharing this..

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miyukaii April 16 2009, 11:16:58 UTC
All my love.♥ Thank you for reading and commenting.

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sheenalinh April 15 2009, 17:41:06 UTC
ever since i was pulled into akameda universe with CLLS, this one is the 2nd one I found written about them in awesome way.
I dont know but ur fic create more complex emotion on me. Twist, yes, the twist, amaze me and make me wanna say WTH
I do love the ending, especially the part u describe Ueda part in this relationship using the bed sharing moments.
Every words were used very well. The plot, the way u write, the angst all so beautiful.
Be confident and create more in this way.

P.S: glad that u aint let Ueda commit suicide ^^

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miyukaii April 16 2009, 09:52:02 UTC
Thank you for the very spirit boosting comment. ♥ I'm trying to write one more oneshot in the same style and hopefully that will come out and be well received such as this oneshot, ♥

I am really thankful for your comment. :D

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zxcvbnm109 April 15 2009, 20:36:35 UTC
wow...this was...beautiful...*sobs* poor Ueda... :(

i just love this...(this is totally going to my memories) I'm glad this has a happy ending...great job!

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miyukaii April 16 2009, 11:18:30 UTC
Thank you. ♥ Although, i am a naturally twisted person who enjoys writing heartbreaking stories rather than fluffy ones, I can hardly stomach sad endings unless written well. LOL. ♥

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