Twisted (Chapter 1)

[miyukaii]

It was not supposed to happen this way. It was not supposed to be this messy, this bloody, this painful. And fuck, it hurts to see everyone go down under the merciless beatings of Kudo’s gang.

He was the fucking leader of 3-D, and here he was being beaten to exhaustion and unconsciousness. He cannot do anything because he promised. He fucking

Comments

[sumomo_yuki]

>< noooooooo kudo u can do more than just rot in hell, believe me I got many ways ....

hayatooooooooooo... okiteeeeeeeeeeeeee!!

[miyukaii]

I hate Kudo so he'll be the best antagonist in this story. :D LOL, As for Hayato, will he die or will he live? ♥ HAHA.

[ilovefuji_xx]

MOAR. MOAR.
NOWWWWWWWWW!

[miyukaii]

But, but...I'm so uninspired. D: I can'r write? Inspire?

[miyukaii]

I'm like an avid ShinKumi fan. So, I'm bringing him back. As for Hayato, secreeeet? :D

[magicaltrinity]

Nice story O_o
WANT MORE!!!! Please update soon. :D

[miyukaii]

I'll try my best to finish the next chapter.

[kirei_shinigami]

Take himself doesn’t know why he uses Ryu to motivate Hayato. Somehow he knew, that maybe having Ryu as Hayato’s inspiration, the latter will never fail.
--got me crying.
last line was kinda sweet...
i love this
♥♥♥

[miyukaii]

Thank you, ♥