Twisted (Chapter 1)

[miyukaii]

It was not supposed to happen this way. It was not supposed to be this messy, this bloody, this painful. And fuck, it hurts to see everyone go down under the merciless beatings of Kudo’s gang.

He was the fucking leader of 3-D, and here he was being beaten to exhaustion and unconsciousness. He cannot do anything because he promised. He fucking

Comments

[falling_petal01]

Miyuki! I am so glad taht you have found the inspration to write this story ^_^
Can't wait for your next chapter. <3
I hope Hayato finds the inspration to wake up for Ryu......

[chrisrenheb]

Wow you got me hooked.
And you brought Shin in.
Kudo was a really intense bad guy.
Will wait for more.
Thanks for sharing.

[eikou_no_uta]

I'm LATE LATE LATE I HATE MYSELF.
I wasn't home this week-end and couldn't read... I'm sad. But now I caught up and OMFG *insert keybord smashing here*

This was really angsty *o* I read about twice to be sure to understand the narration changes, and everytime I had this pinch in my heart T_T

I'll be waiting eagerly for the next chapter!!!
And shocked!Hayato as icon, yay!

[miyukaii]

Do not hate yourself. LOL. As you can see, I'm much later than you are for I am repping at a comment posted on May in October. I shall try to update this fic as soon as possible. :)

[umai_jae_ai]

I loved this!!! I can't wait for more so please update soon! <333

[nane26]

It looks promising ^^ *I love angst... an Ryu is one of the most awesome drama roles ever xD*

Can't wait for the rest~! =D