Fanfiction : Incurable Love Chapter 3

[miyukaii]

I stared at where Ueda was standing a few moments ago.

I went to the nearest bar and order their strongest drink.

“Sir, its just noon.” The bartender replied meekly.

“I’m a damn paying costumer. And when I ask for something, give it to me.”

He gave me a bottle of what seems to be some brandy. I opened the bottle and pour myself a

Comments

[pleu16]

They say that when you are deeply in love, heartbreak can be traumatic. It’ll hurt but when your love is true, you’ll find your way back into each others arms.

XDDDDDDDDDDDDD

[miyukaii]

LOL. :)) I love that line too. :DDD I think that's the only happy line there. :DDD

[lonely_heartz]

it's so sad..poor ryoda..
but i love this!
=]
thank you.

[miyukaii]

Thank you for reading and commenting. ^__^

[hanny2luv]

No...Ryo...
Don't give up yet. You have to fight for ur love.

Love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

[miyukaii]

They really have too. And we know that they will because they love each other. Thank you for reading. ^^

[funkysparks]

omg i can feel ryo's heart breaking. and poor ueda too. they love each other so much but cannot be together. =(

it's really well-written! great job!

[miyukaii]

I'm so mean for hurting Ryo like that. :) Well, we'll be seeing more of Ueda in the following chapters.

Thank you. :DDD

[allboutp]

omg this is soo full of emotions!!*sob*
it feels like the thing that we want is soo near, but the more we try to grasp it, the more it run away, its suffocating *sobs louder*
i feel sad for them, i just hope they wont give up ne~
ok2 thanks for updating, waiting for more!!!

[miyukaii]

Don't cry. :) Its quite suffocating, ne? Especially if its like getting nearer and still no matter how hard you reach for it, you can't get it.

Thank you for reading and commenting. ^^