Miyuki Ishida - Lost and Rendered (II)

May 29, 2009 19:43

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sashwizzled May 30 2009, 00:47:51 UTC
Amazing. In every single way, just amazing. I can't even begin to give this the praise it deserves. Congratulations, Laurra - you really deserved this. ♥

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anbyrobanby May 30 2009, 01:00:44 UTC
Awwwww. ♥

This ending just... well, it was so tragically bittersweet, I loved it. The way Miyuki was fearing that she was becoming slowly like her mother (and maybe perhaps Kaiyo has become the sort of girl Miyuki wished she had been), and... the feeling of hopelessness, but resolute stubborn refusal to give up, even when it didnt feel there wasnt anything to live for... gah, it was so Miyuki through and through.

I kinda want to keep writing, but.... this is the short version... it read well, it was moving, and.... that's just.... perfect.

Fantastic game, amazing class, and superb writing. Well done once more.

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schalein May 30 2009, 01:11:33 UTC
This is beautiful, Laurra. Like, seriously, I'm bawling my eyes out here -Miyuki is just.. guh. She's a perfectly imperfect winner. I love this post, I love Miyuki and, really, really just love the entirety of V7OC. I'm so happy for you, you really deserved this. ♥

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pumpkinart May 30 2009, 04:24:22 UTC
... Oh my god. Laurra. ._.

This was amazing. This was... well, there're hundreds of adjectives I could use. AWESOME, HEARTBREAKING, FUCKING INCREDIBLE, ECT. and none of them do justice to how good this is. :c

It was an immaculate end for Miyuki. V7OC 4EVA <3

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izunami May 30 2009, 05:14:55 UTC
You know...I don't think V7 could have ended any better way than this. I think this post not only gives us a fitting end for Miyuki, but the feelings I walked away with were kind of what I felt for the class as a whole.

It's sad to see them go but thank you so much for making them go out with such a bang.

...and yes, the lame pun was intended.

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