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[mizraim]

SaffronBy Adam Ahmed

Comments

[pyralid]

I particularly like this--beautiful flow of imagery. (Now I'm thinking "flow of energy" because of the sound there, and I don't know but that it may be both.)

[faerieariel]

I LOVE this:
'He keeps asking me what letter this is,
as he reads my back from right to left.'

[venetia]

I like this one a lot; you don't try to impose conclusions on it so it works especially well, for me.