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[mizraim]

Morning Commute
By Adam Ahmed

The train reeks
of wet newspaper
and rotting coffee, but I

sit down and
split open
Leaves of Grass

and try reading
over the voice
of the conductor

who’s too ecstatic
for seven
in the morning.

Comments

Kimble

[hndead]

Himble, Sherry tastes ssssssssssssssooooooooooooo gross.

[warlordkittens]

i love your writing. i find it inspiring. may i please add you to my list?

[mizraim]

Thanks a lot. Of course. I'll add you back.

Are you really from Israel?
That's amazing. I'm Egyptian. It's incredible how art destroys divisions.

[warlordkittens]

of course, lj only now sent me this comment... *kicks lj*

and yup, i'm definitely from israel. i love the idea of art connecting people. it leads to great things.

[emoxbracelet]

haha i like this one too.
especailly when you put the part about the conductor being too estatic in the morning haha