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mizraim

Feb 25, 2006 12:51

Fire ConcertoBy Adam Ahmed ( Read more... )

Comments 5

faerieariel February 25 2006, 21:52:57 UTC

innovative line breaks, and I love the string of thoughts borne from a "scarcity of cielings."

mizraim March 1 2006, 13:49:29 UTC

Yea, I sort of obsessed myself with the word scarcity and other economic/agricultural words that sound interesting.

Thank you!

the_new_ophelia February 27 2006, 02:26:54 UTC

Dear Adam, is your AIM still the same? I'd love a chat sometime.

~Mary

venetia March 1 2006, 08:04:50 UTC

peeled as pears, great last line too. I like this one a lot.

mizraim March 1 2006, 13:48:06 UTC

Thank you very much.