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[mizraim]

Wedding in the Cutting Fieldsby Adam Ahmed

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[blacklieswetell]

I gasped at the end. seriously.

[ophelia24]

Very good.

[marina_lex]

that's so beautiful.

[rhaniha]

Hello, beautiful poet! :-)

This is my favorite part:

"in oversized gowns All rise
for the beheading of the stork

filled with champagne
Ladies and gentlemen

If your true love turned
to salt on the way home

would you lick her
or continue walking"

Completely amazing. Your words are wonderful.

[mersenne]

the whiskey face approves of the return to numbered sections. lamentably, the whiskey face is lax in his own work. soon he hopes to finish a poem concerning Schoenberg, Einstein, and grindcore.