[Sweethearts week]Little Soldier Boy

Feb 12, 2012 22:15

Title: Little Soldier Boy
Genre: friendship/fluff
Pairing(s): OldMan!US+UK
Word Count:  2008
Rating/Warnings: K, slight character death at the end
Summary: Mr. Jones was the old man on the first level who didn't know how to care for his garden and hummed a wonderful song.  A song Arthur fell in love with and found comfort in.
AN: The song used is "LittleRead more... )

fanfiction, sweethearts week, usxuk

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barrelsncrates February 13 2012, 03:39:06 UTC
I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. OH GAWD, I LOVE THIS. I don't usually see oldman!America. It's usually the other way around. Despite there being not a lot, the words in this story says a lot. I'm glad that you didn't actually put in the whole reincarnation stuff because I was almost expected it and I like just having to imagine it being said off-screen. You planned on having Arthur die? But, he's so young! I like the scene where Arthur admits to throwing the first punch and how he ended up joining the British military and visits oldman!Alfred in his uniform.

If I think about it, it's a bit easier to imagine Alfred as the old man rather than Arthur (despite his hobbies and such). I don't know if that's just me or anything.

FAVORITING THIS!

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mizu_from_kumo February 13 2012, 04:01:01 UTC
I'm so glad you like this. I have a bit of a soft spot for Older Al. I was going to kill him, but then I did the math and they're the late 90's meaning there was no major conflict for Arthur to be caught up in.

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ren_chan146 February 21 2012, 16:21:43 UTC
Simply perfect. I've never read something with old man America and Arthur being a little boy. It was endearing from start to end.

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