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[mizuotome]

press your lips to my skin,
make me feel the bliss within.
Make my skin crawl,
please dont drawl,
on and on
just please me
just keep me.
Dont make me cry,
i dont want to die.
hold me tender afterwords,
keep me close
so that i may never fly away.

just an add on to my last poem. though dont know how good it is..even if it is

Comments

word poetry

[anonymous]

Just stop writing poetry.... You're bringing your self down further.

Re: word poetry

[mizuotome]

well that did come right off the top of my head so ya it never turns out right.. and i write beautiful poetry, when i put the time and effort into it thanks!

Re: word poetry

[see_my_wings]

you ... are an aaaaasss... because i bet you are just so much better! Anyone with the gull to degrade someone like that for no reason deserve to be publicly flogged in the new federal prison death lottery... (one day ... when I rule the world ...)

Re: word poetry

[mizuotome]

I LOVES MY WINGS!!! *HUGS*!