DEFIANT EYES, ANGRY MOUTH: 14. Failure in communication

[mjaku]

Title: defiant eyes, Angry mouth
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: HanMin (Hankyung/Sungmin)
Warnings: !SMUT! Violence, Disturbing things in general
Word count: 7512
Summary: Sungmin loved the forest more than anything else. However, after he has a dangerous encounter in the forest he loves so much, and after he's forced to have this same encounter in his

Comments

[miyoung89]

It's here!!!!!! It's here!!!!! the first thing i did aftes i read the author's notes, i skipped to the smutty scene and i was like fhjaghdsgkjagsdfhgdsfkjhsdjfjdcbzxb!!! Ok,i need to calm myself..but the sex is really hawt..
Sungmin!! Way to ruin the perfect moment...
Update soon!!!!!!!

[mjaku]

*huggles* I'm glad you liked it enough to make you all incoherent and stuff XDXD You should've seen the nosebleeds i was having while writing it. I'm too innocent for this shit....

[miyoung89]

All Elfs are pervy~~~

[mjaku]

:DD True story bro

[ext_960201]

I waited for this for soooooooo loooooong!!!
All the Hankyung-Sungmin pairing idea was crushing on my mind against the fact I never saw them this way. But damn you've made it awesome!!!
I love fantasy and wolves and interdependent relationships, and all in one you totally reached the point I was becoming so worried when you weren't coming back that I thought something really bad happened to you ;o;
You've made it big in this chapter you could have named it "F I N A L L Y"!!
Still, it's not enough already, I need more, I bet I'm not the only one and Dear, please keep it up this way, it's just freaking awesome! *-*

Just something that kept to my mind all the smut long.... is the damn window still open?!

I get to know, I liked and now I'm addicted...

(even if I don't like EunHae at all, everything is so Min-centered and HanMin-obsessed that I always forget about that... you're good like that haha~)

[mjaku]

I have never been really into those mainstream pairings. I just come up with a storyline and pick the characters which i like the most XD I'm horrible in that sense.

But don't worry, I'd never abandon this sinking ship I'm in ::D I might be busy and not be around for a while, but i always try to update in my journal about the update and what is happening in my life for me not to update.

Naaaww<3<3 I'm so glad that people like this that much :DD

And oh crap, i forgot the window. OH WELL. Thank you, dear observant reader, I'll close it in the next chapter lolol XD

(I don't like them either because they are so mainstream. However, I like to think i made them a bit different from the usual image, so I rather like writing about them in DEAM ; ))

[ext_960201]

Hopefully I'm not in mainstream pairings as well even if about Hankyung... I can't avoid the perfectness of SiHan and HanChul seriously xD

[mjaku]

True, there are some mainstream pairings that kind of...get stuck after getting all the fanservice and stuff. But in writing I also think it's way easier to just go with the flow and get the characters you like the most :_D But you should try to write in english! After a while it gets easier and the words flow more natural. I recommend!

(Don't worry, the only problems i might encounter are me pulling a muscle or something. It actually happens a bit too often...)

LoL you'll see who noticed it in the next chapter XD omg I laughed so hard while writing it.

*sigh of relief* it's great that they are different in nature. I was really worried at some points. And lol, you have to make a spinoff with sungmin and eunhyuk at some point XDXD Oh don't worry, your biased thinking is absolutely nothing cimpared to mine :DD

[bonchan24]

yup, it's really worth the wait.Super awesome smut with storyline. "The soft lips on his skin were like calming salva to his wounds. The hand gripping the back of his neck like a bandage to a broken bone". I like your metaphores ^^. The former paragraphs were such a torture of thinking "when they will have their first kiss?". I like how hankyung being honest when he said “I want to hear you. Never cover your voice like that.” xD.
When Hankyung said the sex just a business transaction of kind, I wonder if it's his honest feeling or not. Please say it's not true.
“Look at my eyes. Don’t look anywhere else.” OMG 0__0. Nervous nervous.
For the first time, Sungmin had seen Hankyung completely open and non-defensive. Glad to know it ^^. I am so curious, how their relationship would become after their first sex.
Thank you Thank you Thank youuuuuu for this long chapter >__<. Can I ask you when they will have their first kiss??? ^^

[mjaku]

Oh you, stop with the compliments, you're making be blush~~ And ALL your questions will most likely be answered in the next chapter. ALL THE GOOD STUFF COME TO THOSE WHO WAIT MY DEAR.

...

(I'll tell you one thing:

the
kiss
will
be
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EPIC.)

[bonchan24]

Aaaaaargh you're such a teasing. I even imagined their first kiss when I slept, thanks to you xD

[midwest_loli]

Oh, this was very good! I've been waiting so long for a new chapter and FINALLY THERE'S SEX <3 <3

[mjaku]

Oh, I'm so happy you liked it ::DD You have no idea how exhilarated i was when I was writing this. I was happily nosebleeding and chanting all the while that FUCK YES THEY ARE HAVING SEX. Healthy? Not really.

[sweetsmirk137]

OMG NEW READER OMGGGG THIS IS SOO GOODDD

/SMOTHERS YOU WITH KISSES

[mjaku]

*SMOTHERS YOU BACK* OMFG I CAN'T EVEN...!!!!! WELCOME TO THE COLORFUL WORLD OF DEAM, I HOPE YOU ENJOY YOUR STAY XD ASDFGHJKLÖÄASDFHJKLÖÄ'GHSGJKNDGVSDMHJKLÖD OMG I CAN'T EVEN.