A Lean and Hungry Look

[mkatieultra]

Title: A Lean and Hungry Look
Author: mkatieultra
Author's notes: Short story for school, influenced by Muse songs and music videos in ways.. I guess you can use your imagination. There's no real plot. In my mind, it's about two separate universes, both the creature and the man being the same person. The creature's universe would be going backwards in time,

Comments

[ex_shayunkn]

love the muse references; you ended this beautifully :)

also liked how you split the paragraphs up, and the last one really struck me.

wonderful!

[mkatieultra]

Thank you so much! I really hope my teacher likes it as much as you do! :}

[ana_cala]

This is really great! Love it.
I think it worth the sleepless night because is absolutely beautiful.
I hope you have a good grading on it, but your teacher would be crazy if you don't ;)

[mkatieultra]

Thanks a lot! I'm quite pleased with how it turned out, in all honesty! Glad you like :-)

[tiro_muser360]

Wow, this is great! Written really well :)

[mkatieultra]

Thank you so much :}

[engel_sehnsucht]

Ooh, this was brilliant. :)

[mkatieultra]

Thanks a lot. :}

[mkatieultra]

Thank you. I don't get my mark until next week! Fingers crossed!