for meggi who is helping me

[mlk4988]

A road trip is like a right of passage into adult hood. At some point in your life you, like all adults, have taken a road trip. Road trips usually start with a specific destination in mind, something like a concert or an amusement park which is usually the best part of the trip for everyone involved. Sometimes, however, Not making it to the

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happy to help:)

[meganlovedj]

let me just say that, that was the best damn road trip ever, even if we didn't make it to warped tour, and i didn't find that many errors, i only found maybe 1 or 2 things wrong actually....other than that its good=) i put ()'s around corrections, or words that should be taken out.

You need to get a car that has been in the shop (at) 4 times in the past year.

This whole sentence...it took me a while to read it and actually understand all of the information that was provided, so you might want to rephrase it if at all possible, and the word for is mis-spelled(The first step is to get the participants, for the purposes of this paper the participants will be (four)for? 16 to 17 years old, of the road trip up early in the mourning and into the unpredictable car with the vague directions and all of their excitement.)

thats all i really found, hope i helped a little!

much love.

[liestoyourface]

I love you.

[sexyblondd21]

HAHA.. that sounds awesome!! My first road trip.. I'm hoping will be Nov. 4th to Detroit... lets see how this goes!