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Feb 10, 2009 12:20

I wroted a poem ( Read more... )

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x_rock_bunny_x February 10 2009, 16:29:05 UTC
There was a young man named Roskilly,
Who thought poetry ever so silly,
But, even so,
He gave it a go,
And wrote about when it was chilly!

Heehee I wrote a poem about you writing a poem ;P

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mm089 February 12 2009, 12:02:42 UTC
It's beautiful, although I do not think poetry ever so silly, and there are not enough syllables in line 3...

There is a goth-girl we call Katie
Who has studied computerage lately.
She wrote on my blog,
Her words clouded with fog,
But the meaning was infinitely great, see?

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x_rock_bunny_x February 12 2009, 16:28:17 UTC
I doubted you did think it silly, but you try rhyming things with your name :P

And there are enough syllables if you read the comma as a pause. So nyah xD

...yeah, I suck at poetry. But you could probably have guessed that :)

Then again, theres no such word as computerage, and there are too many syllables on line 5. See, I can be a picky bastard too xP

*LOLs at your limerick* ^^

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