It's beautiful, although I do not think poetry ever so silly, and there are not enough syllables in line 3...
There is a goth-girl we call Katie Who has studied computerage lately. She wrote on my blog, Her words clouded with fog, But the meaning was infinitely great, see?
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Who thought poetry ever so silly,
But, even so,
He gave it a go,
And wrote about when it was chilly!
Heehee I wrote a poem about you writing a poem ;P
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There is a goth-girl we call Katie
Who has studied computerage lately.
She wrote on my blog,
Her words clouded with fog,
But the meaning was infinitely great, see?
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And there are enough syllables if you read the comma as a pause. So nyah xD
...yeah, I suck at poetry. But you could probably have guessed that :)
Then again, theres no such word as computerage, and there are too many syllables on line 5. See, I can be a picky bastard too xP
*LOLs at your limerick* ^^
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