Comments | mm_megan: [ahoshi!] chapter 6: further proposals

mm_megan

[ahoshi!] chapter 6: further proposals

Dec 05, 2010 21:26

Hi guys! Sorry it's been a while, but here's the newest and smexiest chapter so far of ahoshi!
( Now that my leg had healed, I could go back to lessons with Colonello. That statement is actually misleading- the optimistic tone of it suggests that I was looking forward to returning to them. I wasn't. I hadn't seen him since my (in retrospect) diva-esque departure at Reborn's apartment block and he hadn't bothered to call me either. It was pretty obvious that our partnership as student and home tutor was on the exponential decline. )

khr, reborn x lambo, fanfiction, reborn x lambo x colonello, writing, lambo is the sweetest idiot, katekyoushi hitman reborn!, cololambo, ahoshi!, yaoi

Comments 26

nivell December 6 2010, 14:31:08 UTC

LEON IS JUDGING HIM!!

I love the way you write Colonello here and the descriptive imagery of his delicious body: 'Herculean arms', 'six pack gleamed like a disco ball' (lol)! He is one sexy, sexy beast and Lambo should be lucky that he got to make out with a Greek god. Oh man, can't wait for the next chapter!

mm_megan December 6 2010, 22:47:30 UTC

:) colonello is too much fun to describe. i just think, 'how would i describe the sexiest man alive?' and thats what comes out.

thanks so much for reviewing!

chaernotwasted December 6 2010, 20:41:47 UTC

Oh thank goodness a new chapter.

This was just what I needed as a tiny break from my end of term OHMYGAWDIHAVENOTIMETOFINISHTHISWORK madness.

I still love the way you're portraying all of the characters. It's absolutely hilarious in every way imaginable.

And you are such a tease with the preview for the next chapter. XD

The whole section with Leon and Reborn and Colonnello's massive dick made my week. :D ♥

mm_megan December 6 2010, 22:52:19 UTC

oh god, tell me about the workload. :( i hope you're not doing IB. i wouldn't wish that on anyone.

woooooot, i'm a tease! :) never been called that before, i must say. thanks so much for commenting!

chaernotwasted December 7 2010, 00:08:46 UTC

Ogawd IB. I did that for three years and loved it but I got sick and behind and lol now I'm in college. XD

Are you in IB? XD

mm_megan December 7 2010, 08:45:57 UTC

haha, no. i do a levels, i just managed to miss the school's swap to IB. :) my friend does it and she seems ready to kill whenever i mention it.

amomentago December 7 2010, 04:00:00 UTC

I just read all 6 chapters to this and I would just like to say, even though I've never been a fan of these three together, I adore everything about this. :>
And the prologue had me mortified for Lambo, I seriously could not stop laughing at all. You write him amazingly well, I love how witty he is!

mm_megan December 7 2010, 08:42:06 UTC

...slowly taking over the world, one reader at a time. :)

thank you so much! i have too much fun writing lambo and feel a lot more connected to his character than i do to reborn or colonello, to be honest.

thanks so much for commenting!

question yoko0525 December 9 2010, 02:54:36 UTC

Hi!!! I'm new in reading this fic (just saw it today at ff.net, how can that happen? I'll never know). Question:

Where were Collonelo and Lambo at when this happened:
"... When the open mouth began to pull away, I threw my arms instinctively around the other person's neck, reconnecting our lips. I moaned into their throat, thrusting my tongue against theirs as I tried to mold our bodies together, sliding myself against my hero...."
Weren't there the usual gossipers (for some reason they appear from nowhere) or where they under the bridge?

Re: question mm_megan December 9 2010, 05:41:00 UTC

hi! :) um well there are a lot of fics on ffnet and khr is getting more and more popular among writers. (i just realised your question might be rhetorical. never mind.)

they were under the bridge, i should've probably made that clear. :S i rewrote that scene like four times so everything changed haha, thanks a lot for pointing that out.

thanks for taking the time to comment!

spiritedseas December 11 2010, 07:04:37 UTC

[b]Does Lambo get with Reborn at the end of this fic?[/b]
Lambo actually realises he's in love with I-Pin,

I actually took you seriously until I read the rest. Then I realized you were joking. XD
Is there going to be a threesome between Reborn, Collonelo and Lambo? If there will, it would be so hot. I'm already drooling from your descriptions of Collonello.

mm_megan December 12 2010, 13:16:37 UTC

ahaha, sorry about that. :S i was being a bit snarky there.

ehehe. there will definitely be one. i've written half of it.

thanks so much for reading!