Ficlet: Hay Fever

[eolivet]

Happy Monday in Hawaii! :D

A little thing I dashed off (and I do mean dashed, heh) after Sunday's episode. A missing scene, if you will... ;p Matthew makes no appearance, but does he have to for Monday in Hawaii? I mean, really -- ALL BETS ARE OFF. :p

Enjoy this random bit of randomness. Randomly. ;p

Comments

[svp1979]

Lovely work as always!! After watching this ep 5 times so far, I think Mary went in thinking she had hay fever, but the after reading this and reading Silvestria's, I now wonder if she ran with hay fever because of not wanting to at the moment consider any other possibilities. She's very headstrong and stubborn in any circumstance, and if by chance she is expecting or showing signs of it, it would come through. I loved how you showed the interactions here, and it was interesting to see how Doctor Clarkson clearly had come to his own conclusions but being Doctor Clarkson, instead of just outright putting the possibility of pregnancy out there, he hedged and true to form, Mary's back got up over it. As always, you've done an amazing job of setting the scene and I feel like I just watched a snippet rather than read it. Amazing work as always and absolutely can't wait to see what you write next!