WoW Character Stuff

[mmstarshine]

Ok, I usually don't share my writing...because I can't take criticism on it, like I can on my art. But I showed this to jim, and he said it was good. So here goes:

Comments

[owlsamantha]

I like it. You're very vivid with descriptions.

[mmstarshine]

It's from being a visual artist I think. I think in images, not words, so when I try and write, what comes out is lots of descriptions. Also, I'm very "in my own head" and dialog is hard for me. It occurs to me, that there is never more than one person in anything I write. ha ha. Maybe I will work on that.

I have an idea forming for a meeting between Enkata and Torbella, I want to try and get it out of my head, but writing is SOOO hard for me, and I've been headachey anyway.