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mo_anam

Life Imitating Art Imitating Life?

Feb 16, 2011 02:13

Title: Life Imitating Art Imitating Life?

Pairing: Mark/Eduardo (with a tiny hint of Andrew/Jesse).

Disclaimer: Fiction, fiction fiction. The fictional characters based on the real people played by the real people are fictional, as is my depiction of the real people who played the fictional characters who were based on the real people.

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fic; tsn

Comments 10

reject36 February 16 2011, 22:19:23 UTC

I love this!! I'm always a sucker for emails/texts being the main source of communication in a fic. You did it wonderfully though. Thanks for sharing! <3

mo_anam February 16 2011, 22:23:13 UTC

Thank you for your sweet comment!

chaotic4life February 16 2011, 23:27:26 UTC

This was fun to read ...

No. Why would you ask? You know I didn’t actually invent facebook, right?
That line actually made me laugh out loud. Brilliant! :)

mo_anam February 16 2011, 23:37:39 UTC

I love that you laughed out loud, that's awesome. I think my favourite voice out of the four is Jesse's. He just amuses.

i_loove_to_rock February 17 2011, 01:39:52 UTC

Dustin drank one of the beers.
lovelovelove it. It was fun to read and the feeling from such short emails was surprisingly strong, so very good job!

mo_anam February 17 2011, 07:27:26 UTC

D'aww. Thank you. Finding the wording to convey maximum emotion in minimum space took a while, and I still wasn't sure I had gotten it, so I very much appreciate your comment.

alicedawkins February 17 2011, 02:32:49 UTC

*chokes a squee in order not to wake people up and flails ridiculously in front of the computer*

I can't words.

''No. Your name was mentioned in the article.''

THIS! I don't know why, but it was so powerful.

''… Dustin drank one of the beers. But the other one’s still sitting here, waiting for you. It’s getting lonely. Sad, pathetic bottle of beer. Won’t you come put it out of its misery?''

THIS!

I'm usually more coherent than this, I swear.

mo_anam February 17 2011, 07:23:44 UTC

I'm loving the incoherency of this comment. Thank you!

michmush February 17 2011, 06:02:03 UTC

“You will find enclosed one basketball, one fleece blanket (beige), every season of Survivor, and one one-way ticket to Palo Alto.

Can't believe Mark took Andrew's ruminations as an actual how-to-guide! And it worked!

<3

mo_anam February 17 2011, 07:26:10 UTC

I see Mark as frustratingly literal, and, really, Eduardo should have seen that coming. Once he agreed that Andrew was even in the neighbourhood of being right about what Eduardo wanted, of course Mark's going to try it. It's all he's got to go on.

Eduardo resisted for a while, but as soon as that box showed up, it was only a matter of time for him. Mark made an effort, and I think that's all Eduardo was waiting for all along.