Shoulda Known Better

[mochandesu]

I have no DOUBT that I could LOVE you forever
The only trouble is you really don't have the TIME

You've got ONEnight only, one night only.
That's all you have to spareOne night only.
In the morning this FEELing will be gone.

taken off a picture out of a Tianmu product/model.

Comments

[gamia]

Y SO SAD? D:

/loves the repetition.

[mochandesu]

Because my own love life is too confusing to end nicely?
IDK I think it started out as smut lmao

Really?
I was nervous about that~

[gamia]

lol. hmm, this is analysis-worthy :p a fic influenced by author's personal life.

yes. i love repetitions cos i don't know. they're very nice to use.

[mochandesu]

Lol it's only a little. Mine's only almost failing, those poor babies have failed :/

I love them too, but last time I tried them my friend thought I was being redundant.

[tokkei_12]

Oh, Heechuuuuuuul D: So much angst, especially with that last sentence T.T But very beautiful, albeit in a depressing way, and I loved it! &hearts

[mochandesu]

Thank you!
I'm glad you liked it despite all the angst :3

[animearumira01]

...so sad, well i guess i too should know better knowing it's an angst in the first place.... i felt lonely while reading this... (i really love the pairing, and missing them so much right now)..that makes the story so good, though i kind off wish it would somehow have a not so angst ending, then again it would lessen the quality of the stroy... and i kinda off appreciate the thoughts and angsty surrounding the fic...

..i'll end it here...
~akap akap~ (hug hug)
.take care.
*peace out*

[mochandesu]

I hadn't planned on making such an angsty ending, but it just ended up that way X3
Thanks for reading and commenting :D

[pink_pot]

WAE OMG WAE?!
THERE GOES MY HANCHUL HEART...

[mochandesu]

I'M SORRY D: