A moment, she asked, and a moment he allowed, for who is he to refuse Catelyn Tully? And if she is fool enough to think that he would have locked doors with no way to see inside, in his own business, in especially a business of this…variety…then he shall certainly not be discourteous enough as to disillusion her. Stark may be too honorable to ask for a bedchamber but he is not too honorable to send his wife leagues away without a goodbye, it seems.
His mouth on hers, Stark lifts her onto the desk, hands sliding familiarly along her thighs to push up her skirts. Petyr brushes the tip of his tongue to his lips at the sight of her bare skin, still pale and smooth as those days in Riverrun when she would rise from her bath, unmindful of his eyes even then, she never seems to see him. His cock twitches at the thought, even as he seethes at the idea, at the sight, of Ned Stark putting his hands on her, of her letting him, her face flushed with arousal
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This is incredible! Petyr has the perfect mix of obsessive love and anger. Voyeurism suits his character, and his resentment warring with his arousal was a great thread. I also loved your Ned/Cat brothel sex and how their dynamic contrasts with Petyr's creepiness.
Thank you! :D I think Petyr definitely has some anger towards Catelyn and a need to prove himself as not just little Petyr Baelish from the Fingers, 'Littlefinger.' I think he wants to have her admiration and yes, a good dose of fear, too.
THIS IS SO TWISTEDLY (is that even a word?? lol) PERFECT; is it awful that I wouldn't put it past Petyr to do something of this nature in canon?? :/
Petyr brushes the tip of his tongue to his lips at the sight of her bare skin, still pale and smooth as those days in Riverrun when she would rise from her bath, unmindful of his eyes even then, she never seems to see him.
and this line is PERFECT--as dirty!bad!wrong as it is, there's just something so SAD about how deeply he's longed for this woman his entire life, and I really think you managed to capture that so beautifully here (y)
IF TWISTEDLY IS NOT A WORD IT SHOULD BE. XD Thank you so much! And no, not awful at all, Ned is still talking to Catelyn at the end of his chapter and the next time we see him is later, THIS COULD HAVE TOTALLY HAPPENED AND WHERE DID PETYR GO ANYWAY.
Thank you! I really tried to deal with the complexity of all his feelings for Catelyn (y'know, within a comment fic of him perving on her having sex) - there's still that obsessive love that's both passion and pathetic, and I think he probably harbors some serious anger towards her, too.
those traces left behind
A moment, she asked, and a moment he allowed, for who is he to refuse Catelyn Tully? And if she is fool enough to think that he would have locked doors with no way to see inside, in his own business, in especially a business of this…variety…then he shall certainly not be discourteous enough as to disillusion her. Stark may be too honorable to ask for a bedchamber but he is not too honorable to send his wife leagues away without a goodbye, it seems.
His mouth on hers, Stark lifts her onto the desk, hands sliding familiarly along her thighs to push up her skirts. Petyr brushes the tip of his tongue to his lips at the sight of her bare skin, still pale and smooth as those days in Riverrun when she would rise from her bath, unmindful of his eyes even then, she never seems to see him. His cock twitches at the thought, even as he seethes at the idea, at the sight, of Ned Stark putting his hands on her, of her letting him, her face flushed with arousal ( ... )
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Petyr brushes the tip of his tongue to his lips at the sight of her bare skin, still pale and smooth as those days in Riverrun when she would rise from her bath, unmindful of his eyes even then, she never seems to see him.
and this line is PERFECT--as dirty!bad!wrong as it is, there's just something so SAD about how deeply he's longed for this woman his entire life, and I really think you managed to capture that so beautifully here (y)
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Thank you! I really tried to deal with the complexity of all his feelings for Catelyn (y'know, within a comment fic of him perving on her having sex) - there's still that obsessive love that's both passion and pathetic, and I think he probably harbors some serious anger towards her, too.
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