Fic: Criminology 101 (3/?)

[moeexyz]

Fandom: Community
Title: Criminology 101
Character/Pairing(s): One sided Annie/Troy, past Jeff/Britta, and eventual Jeff/Annie.
Rating: PG
Summary: Mafia AU. Annie gets her introduction into Greendale's crime world, in the hopes that she can finally bag Troy Barnes.  Meanwhile, Jeff tries to keep things running smoothly while Pierce is busy, and he has

Comments

[classicfreak]

I'm sure I shouldn't be feeling this feeling of excitement (or society says it's wrong at least) but you've done it again, you angel you.

JEFF YOUR GLEE AT THE BOMB MADE ME LOVE YOU
Annie, please kill someone to save Jeff, and then bone the shit out of him
That would be awesome
I can toads see Britt a building bombs, it kind of reminded me of Accross the Universe for a second there (esp. the song you were listening to)

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PERFECT!

[moeexyz]

Screw society. And thank you!

Annie's kill is coming up soon, though I can't promise any crazy mafia sextimes between Jeff and Annie ... mostly because I can't write smut. It would end up being all penis insert into vagina

DUUUUUDE, I love that movie! And Britta totally would be the extremist bomber type. XD

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[teruel_a_witch]

penis insert into vagina
Mwah, why not "insert item A into slot B"? xDDD I hear you,though, I couldn't write smut if my life depended on it (welll, if Community's life depended on it I'd rethink that but mine isn't that important) they say you need to write what you know, all I know is the stuff I'd learnt from fanfic, which isn't the most reliable source I imagine XD Though sexxin' does not need to be explicitly written to be hot, personally I like tasteful vague descriptions that resemble more of a brushstroke of a painter rather than a scale drawing of an engineer, leaving the rest to imaginationxD

[moeexyz]

all I know is the stuff I'd learnt from fanfic
That's the same for me as well. I'd try it, but I'd be afraid of it coming out all unrealistic, because the fuck do I know about sex? Especially wild mafia sex XD

I like tasteful vague descriptions that resemble more of a brushstroke of a painter rather than a scale drawing of an engineer, leaving the rest to imagination
I quite like that as well. Stuff like that always gives me butterflies in my stomach.
And once I accidentally wrote smut like that, though so I could try it. And I say accidental because I have no idea how I wrote it. It just sort of came out.

[biia_black]

Awesome, as always.
And about the smut...well, if you never start writing it, then how will you get better? ;)

[moeexyz]

Thank you :)
Trust me, you don't want me to write it. I wouldn't want to scar you for life.

[mrssnape13]

And now you've got me going "Oh that's so sweet!" when people are doing awful thing like blowing up factories.

You are awesome. :)

[moeexyz]

Haha, this fandom are all gonna be insane by the time I finish this.

Thank you!

[shionthekid]

Just caught up with this fic and I'm so glad I did :) I'm a total sucker for AUs and haven't read or watched anything mob-related in a while so it's a nice change of pace. I love seeing how each of the minor characters fit into this world, too - of course Vaughn's their supplier. Will we learn what Rich did to earn Jeff's eternal hatred? Shirley as a cop makes total sense as does Britta as the bombmaker (it just really seems perfect for her somehow). Jeff's sadism with Starburns gave me pause but he is the man to get things done and I suppose soon Annie will get a turn at that as well, considering the first chapter. Those lessons should be fun to read =D

[moeexyz]

I haven't really put in a reason for Jeff hating Rich. Mostly I'm just going with it's Rich and that's enough of a reason :)
Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you're liking it so far.

[n_e_star]

How did I miss this story!

It was whacked out and still so them and it is AWESOME!!!!

[moeexyz]

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it.