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midtega October 28 2012, 21:33:10 UTC
Dammit pierce why do u have to ruin jeff and annies sext times

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moeexyz October 30 2012, 12:44:15 UTC
Well, he is the bad guy, sort of.

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second_shooter October 28 2012, 22:10:52 UTC
PLEASE, I BEG OF YOU, TO NOT LOSE THIS INSPIRATION!

This chapter was of course AMAZING so thank you, thank you, thank you!

Ok I now have to go tell everyone that Criminology updated, see you next chapter update!

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moeexyz October 30 2012, 12:44:40 UTC
You're welcome. And I will try to stay inspired. And thank you for the comment. :)

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crittab October 29 2012, 02:05:51 UTC
Holy crap! Once again, pure brilliance. The way you've managed to mould these characters into this mob setting so effortlessly is just astonishing, and every chapter is better than the last. You're seriously a gifted storyteller. Honestly, you should change the names of the characters and the town and turn this into a crime novel.

Epic. Simply epic.

Oh, and hot too. Darn Pierce and his timing!

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moeexyz October 30 2012, 12:45:41 UTC
you should change the names of the characters and the town and turn this into a crime novel.
I'll call it 50 Shades of Death.

Thank you so much.

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kbisthebest October 29 2012, 15:26:49 UTC
YOU ARE BACK!!LOVE this chapter!!!

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moeexyz October 30 2012, 12:45:54 UTC
Glad you liked it.

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moeexyz October 30 2012, 12:47:12 UTC
That hilarious parting image was sort of what I was going for. That and I love cliffhangers. But thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

At this point it would be best to just handwave the death and murder.

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