Ok, first need to get this clear as i'm a little slow. Is Carole dead or not at the end? *is thick*
wow. really brilliant stuff. your writing has really matured and developed since i last read any of your longer stuff. this is really brilliant, clearly well researched and emotive. It is endearing, romantic, frustrating in the right places, scary and happy where it should be.
the original characters are dynamic and have many dimensions. and the contuinung characters fit their characters in the show. well done! great fic :)
Yup, is dead ): Glad you liked it!I think that writing fic is actually a really good way to develop writing wise. It was a nightmre to research for this, the people on nano were rather helpful.
...How has this not got more comments...people must be slow as it's big bang.
Anyway, AMAZING fic. I thoroughly enjoyed it though I nearly cried when Carole died. It was cute in places, slightly amusing in others but was bloody sad at times too. A ride of emotions in a very original fic.
This story is just fantastic! I agree with other commenters that it has a great balance of frustration, sadness, romance...you are one of those writers that make it look effortless, but really writing something like this is very, very difficult. I've tried, but I try to overcomplicate it and get nowhere. Very nicely done :)
This turned out absolutely AMAZING! <3 I love every little bit of it and your writing style is great! It had me nearly crying in quite a few places and grinning in others. The original characters were well written and awesome and the canons were totally in character.
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wow. really brilliant stuff. your writing has really matured and developed since i last read any of your longer stuff. this is really brilliant, clearly well researched and emotive. It is endearing, romantic, frustrating in the right places, scary and happy where it should be.
the original characters are dynamic and have many dimensions. and the contuinung characters fit their characters in the show. well done! great fic :)
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Glad you liked it!I think that writing fic is actually a really good way to develop writing wise.
It was a nightmre to research for this, the people on nano were rather helpful.
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yeah, it really is!
i can imagine. awesome :)
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Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the review!
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Anyway, AMAZING fic. I thoroughly enjoyed it though I nearly cried when Carole died. It was cute in places, slightly amusing in others but was bloody sad at times too. A ride of emotions in a very original fic.
LOVED IT!!!
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Thanks for the comment (:
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This turned out absolutely AMAZING! <3
I love every little bit of it and your writing style is great!
It had me nearly crying in quite a few places and grinning in others. The original characters were well written and awesome and the canons were totally in character.
I loved this a lot!
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