Mechanical Michelangelo part 31

May 25, 2005 20:43

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mo_52 May 26 2005, 00:13:32 UTC
God I love this story. Your original characters are so well done. Stupid Jennifer.

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mohawking May 28 2005, 09:43:15 UTC
I'm glad you think so! I do worry about over using the originals

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ladooshka May 26 2005, 00:30:36 UTC
I've got that warm feelings when reading this new chapter because of Justin's friends who were in a hospital and who came later! It's very true that they are not just close friends, they are Justin's support group, his only family who would never desert him or throw him away not like his parents did.

I was very angry at Jennifer when she said that Craig was on his way to the hospital, Craig who yelled at Justin on a phone and literally restricted a poor boy to contact his mother and a sister. How hypocritical it is!

And I am very much in love (he-he) with Bren who are so calm and keeps their ground for rights to be there for Justin.

I certainly agree that Cam has very rights to be there first, he is an emergency contact for Justin. Jennifer has to realize it too and open her eyes on what is going on with Jusitn's life.

I am only sorry that there was not Brian in this chapter:-)

*strong hugs for a wonderful story*

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mohawking May 28 2005, 09:45:50 UTC
Nods, Justin has a solid group of friends now, even if they are hustlers! He has a life outside Jen, one he was forced into, but one where he belongs...and none of them will let Jen force them away;p

Ah, Bren, he is my voice of reason lol!

thanks for the fb!

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MM 31 mdlaw May 26 2005, 01:49:48 UTC
JEN!!! shaking her till her head snaps back and forth.....

Where's Brian?

Loved it.
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Re: MM 31 mohawking May 28 2005, 09:46:36 UTC
*Where's Brian?*

changing his clothes?:-)

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kaysm95 May 26 2005, 03:00:53 UTC
Oh, still beautiful. Can't wait for more. Maybe Chris could be released and the boys could take care of him? Maybe, please?

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mohawking May 28 2005, 09:46:51 UTC
don't tempt me!

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thistle90 May 26 2005, 03:52:19 UTC
I love that all of Justin's friends came and I love Bren sticking it to Jen. But it is KILLING ME waiting for Justin to wake up.

*joins hustlers in virtual waiting room*

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mohawking May 28 2005, 09:48:43 UTC
Justin has a family, and they aren't related by blood (which is so much better for him, considering his luck with parents!)

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