Mechanical Michelangelo part 37

Jun 18, 2005 20:50

part 37 )

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mo_52 June 18 2005, 20:55:29 UTC
Very nice chapter. I loved how descriptive the last two lines were.

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mohawking June 20 2005, 21:14:30 UTC
glad you liked! it took me a few tries to get this chapter to work :g:

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princesskirsty June 18 2005, 21:24:20 UTC
the last two lines there made me all happy inside! don't take it away from me!

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mohawking June 20 2005, 21:14:51 UTC
it's already written...i can't take it away!:-)

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burnitbackward June 18 2005, 22:20:11 UTC
just beautiful

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mohawking June 20 2005, 21:15:04 UTC
thank you!

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mistress_marsha June 19 2005, 01:06:45 UTC
Brian is starting to change....the fact that the lost boys are setting up camp in his place is proof of that. Nice gesture and very generous.

Michael needs to step back and think about what Brian needs at this point. His snarky remarks fell on deaf ears....this is not about the Hotel Kinney....this about support and concern for Justin. Bren and Cam may be there for now but Brian is very much a part of the healing process and he will do what he must to help.

"His right arm twitched and Brian caught it in his hands, rubbing the tender skin and opening his clawed fingers massaging his palm."

That's what Justin needs....those lines said it all. Warmth and compassion....a new side to Brian. Oh yes....and love. Sigh.

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mohawking June 20 2005, 21:18:35 UTC
The boys are all doing what's best for Justin, and in a weird way, Brian wants the lost boys there for himself, they keep him from thinking too deeply and they are a part of Justin. Mikey is pissed that Brian isn't turning to him in his hour of need ::g::

that last paragraph kind of came easy...after I scapped the first draft i had (for some reason having Justin awake didn't seem to work)

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crazy4qaf June 19 2005, 02:03:59 UTC
God, how I love the way Brian distances from everyone`s expectations. LOL I do that too sometimes. :)

“Don’t look so pleased with yourself, it doesn’t mean we’ll make it, or that we’ll even stay friends, it means I’m not going to let him push me away this time, and if he runs, I’ll find him. I don’t do relationships, I barely do friendships, just ask Mikey.”Most perfect line here, hon. :D ( ... )

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mohawking June 20 2005, 21:22:55 UTC
Mikey is no Vince! He's way too dependant on Brian I think, and guilt is definitely the right word, he guilts Brian into feeling bad if he feels genuine emotions for someone.

The lost boys are cute ::grin:: i don't know who called them that first, but I think it was a reviewer here lol, the name just wouldn't go away after that:)

and Mikey should chill, it's not as if he's going to adopt one of them! He feels comfortable with them because they aren't afraid of caring for Justin, and he doesn't have to feel guilty for all the emotions he feels for Justin and what happened.

OK, I'm going off on a tangent now lol!
thanks for the fb!

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crazy4qaf June 20 2005, 22:30:15 UTC
lol You saying that as if tangents are bad. ;)

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