Oh yes, this is so much better than the way it happen in canon. Short but excellent. You really had me on the edge waiting to see what Brian would do. m
I could never get over Brian peeing on Justin's work, after all Justin went through, how hard he was trying to rebuild his life...peeing on his work was in a way worse than the bat to the head
I like how you've rewritten the scene and glad that Bren talked Brian out of his anger or he might did something similar to canon though Brian's reaction always amazed me because he doesn't do jealousy or simply he does and has to admit it:)
He is so jealous and in love!:)
Thanks for a wonderful update though the last one was so long ago*))
Bren is the voice of reason lol! thanks for the fb:) i suppose the peeing does show justin brian was jealous, but i still can't get over the peeing on his work! bad brian;)
Brief but very good chapter. Demonstrates Brian's emotional involvement with Justin at this point. I hope you won't take so long to update again. This is a good story.
I have everything including the ending planned in my head, unfortunately I decided I could work full time and study full time for a masters at the same time (why oh why did i think that?!), which leaves me with minus free time for other stuff:(
Yay, an update!! Hadn't checking in a long time. Great chapter. I'm so glad to see Justin getting his art back. And thank you for not having Brian piss all over everything.
I wish it was longer. Heh. But, I understand and empathize with the whole life-interfering-with-writing thing. I do hope that you manage to finish this story. It's one of my favorites.
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He is so jealous and in love!:)
Thanks for a wonderful update though the last one was so long ago*))
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I love this fic is one of my favourites, I hope that you decides to finish it; it'd be a pity to let it unfinished.
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when things cool down a little i'll be back!
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I wish it was longer. Heh. But, I understand and empathize with the whole life-interfering-with-writing thing. I do hope that you manage to finish this story. It's one of my favorites.
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I really am attempting to finish this story, it's just going to take a loooong time!
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