Comments | mohawking: Mechanical Michelangelo part 27

mohawking

Mechanical Michelangelo part 27

May 14, 2005 21:47

( part 27 )

Comments 32

burnitbackward May 15 2005, 01:59:20 UTC

*gurrrrrrrrrrrr*

why why why why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why would you do that!!!!!!!!!!! so mean! soooo fucking mean! *sigh* brilliant chapter as always, but please for gods sake get the next one out fucking quick... like... today. today would be nice. *sigh* you're wicked, totally and completely wicked.

mohawking May 15 2005, 21:03:16 UTC

am writing as we speak, but i'm working, like, two weeks in a row without a break so it's gonna take a few days, maybe more! sorry:-)

souls_tamer May 15 2005, 02:29:43 UTC

OoOoOohhhh... I sooo wana see your rendition on the bashing... I like how you worked it into the story since it was such a turning point in the show

mohawking May 15 2005, 21:04:21 UTC

I hope you'll enjoy my take on it, and how it'll affect the more mature b/j!:) thanks for the fb

OH NO mdlaw May 15 2005, 03:11:03 UTC

Ha! I started saying on no as soon as the song that Justin didn't recognize started playing. I can't believe it. I never saw it coming before this chapter. m

Re: OH NO mohawking May 15 2005, 21:05:11 UTC

I wasn't sure if people would put two and two together if i said more than 'meeting up with daphne' ::grin:: i knew as soon as i mentioned a dance people would start to cotton on

babylonbabe May 15 2005, 03:25:38 UTC

Holy hell need an update like an hour ago! :)

landed on his....What?!?! omg need finished sentence ASAP!

mohawking May 15 2005, 21:05:35 UTC

sorry, won't be for a few days yet!:-)

mistress_marsha May 15 2005, 04:00:51 UTC

No no no....you didn't do this.....again.

Of course I noticed how you ended the chapter with just "his"....not saying what body part was hit.

Very clever and quite maddening. You are driving me crazy. LOL

Now I'm going to have to stalk the LJ for the next chapter.

Way to go wicked writer. Love it.

mohawking May 15 2005, 21:07:24 UTC

i know, i know...AGAIN ::G:: it's something that's been done and done in fic, but i swear it's not just thrown in there...it's a definite plot device and will help move everything in the direction i want it to go (which does not end in Justin's death;-)

glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the fb!