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piratepurple June 10 2007, 23:07:47 UTC
So sweet!

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mokalicious June 10 2007, 23:15:11 UTC
Thank you. i'm glad you liked it.

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fb - moments kaleecat June 11 2007, 08:50:09 UTC
I like this, moments leading up to realization. Kind of like a 'previously on...' sequence, but better because we get spander at the end. It has a lovely flow to it - emotion and language wise.

thanks for posting this quiet gem.

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Re: fb - moments mokalicious June 11 2007, 19:18:18 UTC
That's exactly how i wanted it conveyed, so great that you got that and wow where were you when i was writing my summary.

Thank you so much for the great fb. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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bmblbee June 11 2007, 11:16:07 UTC
Very sweet and the relationship progressing
naturally. Nice job.

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mokalicious June 11 2007, 19:23:33 UTC
I'm very much into the sweeter side of the pairing, mainly because i like happy endings.

Thanx alot for the comment, i'm glad you liked it.

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bmblbee June 11 2007, 20:10:40 UTC
I agree completly. All my stories have happy endings

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