Distance (Final chapter part 2)

Feb 01, 2011 13:47


 Title: Distance Author: Moko
Pairing: Ohmiya, Yama, slight Aimiya
Rating: R
Genre: AU, drama, romance...
Disclaimer: The story comes from my brain...?
Beta-ed by bluemonstar ! Love you dear ♥!

Summary: When Ohno has to get married, his long relationship with Nino comes to an end against his wish. But 3 years later, Nino suddenly ( Read more... )

p: ohmiya, p: yamapair, distance, g: drama, g:au

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mgunawat February 1 2011, 13:59:34 UTC
Uwaaaaaa, It's already ending... I love it ends with yama pair^^
I kind of guessed that Sho already knew Oh chan had an affair..
Why did you have to make sho chan so sweet in thsi fiction?

And I also love how you inserted Yama's sweet NC-17 scene;)
Poor Kazu, but I guess it has to end like this for everyone's goodness..

Thank you so much for writing this.. and glad to hear you already cooking up new ideas to write again.. I'll be looking forward..
You're such a good writer you know^^

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mokohno February 4 2011, 10:12:08 UTC
=D But Sho's always sweet with Satoshi, isn't he? I like this... I suppose that's why he's so sweet here =D
Thanks a lot ^^ For reading and saying I'm a good writer, that kind of thing really touch me, you know ♥♥♥

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mokohno February 4 2011, 10:14:02 UTC
XD I'd like a husband like him too ^^
I think it's normal for Oh-chan to be hesitating... Or not hesitating, more like... Wondering how his life would be like if he had chosen Nino, don't you think? And I'm sure Nino wonders about that too =D
Thanks a lot, as always! ♥♥♥

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anesato February 1 2011, 16:24:08 UTC
Yamaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa yeyeyey
to be honest I thought that you chose Ohmiya but no ;d ,
Yama is really cute together
and Sho really show that he loves Ohno so much, even with his mistakes from past , really happy family, Cute Hiromi ;DDDD
and Ohno doubts at the end, somehow I understand him , he really loves Nino and Nino him , so ;d
Great story like always I said that I LOVE THIS ♥♥♥
actualy I love all your stories so please bring new story ;DDDDD

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mokohno February 4 2011, 10:17:15 UTC
=D I couldn't bear making Sho and Aiba suffer too much, so...
Thanks a lot ♥♥♥

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nakabibighani February 1 2011, 16:38:12 UTC
this ending is truly good. my otp is ohmiya but i appreciated this final part nonetheless, because i cannot think of an ending better than this. and hiromi is really cute; inheriting ohno's pout and sho's talent, or rather sense, for drawing. loved the part where ohno confessed to jun that ohmiya shared a little little kiss a long time ago :)

please continue writing! ^_^ i loved lost soul and i enjoyed distance as well. so if you don't mind, share the fic you are working on in your head with us too, onegaishimasu!

finally, thank you! for sharing this fic and the ones before this. perhaps you don't think about the effect you have on the readers as you write... but i just want to say, in behalf of everyone if i may, that all you writers touch us in ways you don't expect. because your works elicit genuine emotions from our hearts.

i am kind of emotional because of this ending ;) again, arigatou!

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mokohno February 4 2011, 10:22:14 UTC
*smiling like an idiot* That is soooo sweet! You know, I didn't think could touch peoples in this way too, so... I'm so glad =D
And of course I'll share something new ^^ Because I really can't stop writing, and peoples commenting on my fictions and telling me what they think about it make me so happy ^^
Thanks a lot ♥♥♥

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nakabibighani February 4 2011, 13:05:19 UTC
if i add you as a friend, would you mind? i hope you don't :)

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mokohno February 4 2011, 17:27:06 UTC
I don't mind at all =D I added you back ^^

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nira60 February 1 2011, 17:47:02 UTC
je crois que je vais être la seule chieuse a raler parce que Ohno et Nino ne finissent pas ensemble.... pas grave, j'aime bien être la chieuse de service! XD
J'aime cette fin, d'une certaine façon, mais en même temps c'est... douloureux parce qu'il n'y a pas vraiment de solutions... Il aime Sho mais il aimera toujours Nino mais en contre partie il a une fille magnifique ^^
D'ailleurs j’étais super étonnée que tu utilises Hiromi pour du Yama!! traitresse! lol
c'est censée être la fille de N'Ohno-chan et de Neen

Par contre ce chapitre confirme bien ta théorie: je ne supporte vraiment pas d'autres pairings que le Ohmiya!! XD
Bon j'arrête parce que tu vas croire que je n'ai pas aimé alors que c'est pas vrai ^^
♥♥♥♥♥

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mokohno February 4 2011, 10:24:52 UTC
Ouai mais je voulais mettre Hiromi dans une ficeuh! Et puis, s'ils ont un enfant, ça ne peut être qu'elle... Le Neen s'en remettra je pense... Il en profite déjà pas mal d'une façon générale xD *Okay, je me tais*

Ah bah... Et moi qui pensait écrire du Juntoshi u_u *Non je rigole, ce sera juste un OS pour Yassou xD* Next fic is an Ohmiya one! =D
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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