Pride (6/10)

Jun 21, 2013 16:26

Title: Pride
Author: Moko
Pairing: Ohmiya, Sakumoto, Yama, Matsumiya
Rating: R-ish, for violence...
Genre: Romance, drama
Disclaimer: They're not mine...
Summary: When Ohno Satoshi got a new job, he knew he would have to face his past again, but what he didn't expect was to be helped by the most unexpected person...

Previous chapters

I immediately recognize Sho’s furious voice )

g: romance, p: ohmiya, p: sakumoto, pride, g: drama, r:r

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mikamichael June 21 2013, 15:06:41 UTC
ouuuu i thought we gonna wait until next week to read ur update,,glad u post it now x3
ahhh violent sho,,he could've killed satoshi ;__;
more than his violence, i kinda hate sho's indecisive more,,he wouldn't be happy if he couldn't move on x0 satoshi already got nino,so he should stop worrying over nothing xD
thanks for this update,,u really make my day

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mokohno June 28 2013, 11:27:46 UTC
Yeah, well, Sho's being really stupid in this , but I guess what he did kind of haunts him and he can't move on...
Thank you =) <3

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himitsu_17 June 21 2013, 15:25:26 UTC
Yaa!!! Love reading Nino's P.O.V!

Thanks so much dear!

And in less than 2 weeks the awesome Japan Expo! Can't wait!

Miss ya!

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mokohno June 28 2013, 11:32:32 UTC
Haha yeah JE is in a week now!! Though I don't think I'll go... I guess we'll see each other rather on Sunday ^^""
Thank you~ <3

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zukkoke_iero June 21 2013, 15:32:24 UTC
yay! I'm... kind of glad you decided to post this first. but it means... no update for next week? ><
i really love your nino. he wants to protect ohno at any cost. I hope he'll let the good ninomiya completely takes control of him. but likely, it'll be boring without the evil nino XDD
and the scene with his sister is funny too! somehow I imagined Domyouji n his sister (i forgot her name) relationship. lol.
poor ohno to have such a terrible experience ><
thanks for sharing! :D

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mokohno June 28 2013, 11:48:52 UTC
I'll wait until I'm done with this fic before posting anything else so no delayed update =)
Oh, now that you mention Domyouji's sister, it kind of makes me think about their relationship too x)
Thank you ^^

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reisakurano June 21 2013, 16:39:48 UTC
ohh poor Ohchan ;__; and Nino with a slight split personality ? ;D
nice~ wonderful <3

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mokohno June 28 2013, 11:49:26 UTC
A sort of split personality yeah XD
Thank you~ =D

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mizakiwa June 21 2013, 22:31:24 UTC
I love it when you change the P.O.V for the same scene in a previous chapter ♥ This chapter was great! I'm glad we got to know what happened to Ohno, but dang I would be traumatized if that happened to me too. Good thing Nino's there to get him over that trauma ;D Thanks for sharing ^u^

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mokohno June 28 2013, 11:50:01 UTC
Really? I thought it might be a bit boring since it's the same moment twice, but I'm glad you like it =)
Thank you <3

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