[Glee] Twisted romance, part 1

[mokoshna]

Title : Twisted romance
Author : Mokoshna
Pairing : Puck/Kurt
Rating : PG
Spoilers : After Journey.
Disclaimer : Fox owns Glee.
Summary : Could it be more cliché than that ? Puck and Kurt, one song at a time.
Warnings : Crossdressing, High School Musical references in this chapter.
Notes : Writing in english is hard. And very tedious. Don’t hesitate to

Comments

[jainas]

Twisted indeed. :D

I'm probably not the best person to give you advice on your english though.

[mokoshna]

Thanks! I know I'm not very good, but I'm trying anyway.

[slanderouslibel]

I think this is okay. It could be great, though. You should try to find a beta reader. But you are off to a really good start.

[mokoshna]

Thank you. I'm too lazy to find one (I just want to see what I can write in english) but thanks for the advice anyway.

[gleeker13]

This is a great story :) Although I will admit, the way you show dialogue throws me off a bit...Whenever there was a quote in my Spanish book at school I was all "What?" Other than that, though, this is extremely good for English not being your first language.

[mokoshna]

Thank you. I'll try to change the presentation in the next chapter.

[haolover9312]

The story was overall very cute! Good job! However just one thing irked me a bit. Try not to use the word "retarded" in a phrase like "that was retarded" because it can be really offensive. Other than that, I didn't see major errors but a beta wouldn't hurt either! :)

[mokoshna]

Thank you. I'll try to correct it when I write the next chapter (right now I'm not in the mood for that).

[ayurubie]

Kurt was speechless. Sometimes, Puck's stupidity rivaled Finn's.

made me guffawed. :D

[mokoshna]

It's merely the truth. ^^