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mollrach13

What Could Be Lost

Oct 31, 2012 20:09

Title: What Could Be Lost
Rating: PG
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin, Established Relationship
Warnings/Spoilers: Modern!AU, no spoilers. Not beta'd.
Disclaimer: Characters do not belong to me
Summary: “Papa…” the small voice through the speaker of his little boy hitched, and Arthur could suddenly hear the uncontrolled sniffling through the line. The computer ( Read more... )

merlin/arthur, fic:merlin, established-relationship, oneshot, kmm fill, modern!au

Comments 9

bunnysworld October 31 2012, 21:38:33 UTC

Awwwww, so sweet and tender. Love it.

lazy_8s November 1 2012, 02:06:33 UTC

Gorgeous, with just right amount of angst and sweetness. Loved it! :)

owensheart November 1 2012, 16:13:24 UTC

Well my heat was in my throat for a minute there, glad he is ok though. great story.

katmarajade November 1 2012, 19:05:50 UTC

Ohhh! *clutches heart* Lovely with a hefty dollop of heart pounding angst and sweet happy ending. Also loved nurse!Gwaine and Morgana taking over and driving him home like a bat out of hell. Awesome.

eiralys76 November 1 2012, 21:02:20 UTC

"Arthur felt warmth surge in his heart and wondered what he would have become: a dark shell of himself, the whole world painted grey and meaningless now that his Merlin was gone."

This is beautiful, as is Arthur's realisation that his own father lost his great love, and the grief that he had to live with. I like that sense of an adult Arthur suddenly coming to this realisation. I also loved the details about Merlin never charging his phone, and parking his Eco car skew wif in the driveway was just adorable.