dw - intersections

[momentmusical]

Title: Intersections
Rating: PG
Characters: TenII/Rose, Narrator 
Word Count: 3,030
Genre: Romance
Summary: A runner-turned-heiress and the man who played in sandboxes. A love story told from the outside in. 
A/N: For challenge 21 at 

Comments

[tabula_x_rasa]

I really liked reading this. I'm a sucker for a well-done outside POV, and this was lovely.

[momentmusical]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it ♥.

[sarah_120]

Beautiful. Love the metaphors.

[momentmusical]

Thank you so much!! ♥

[shiny_rosie]

Oh! This is beautiful! I loved it all, but this is my favorite bit:

And for a runner who never forgot how to even when she tried, trainers seem like the perfect way to go.

Yes. Just like that. :) And I want to know more about our narrator! She seems really great! :)

[momentmusical]

Awww, thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked that part; I was quite fond of it myself, and to have it quoted... *dances* :DDD.

I'm so happy you liked the narrator! I was really worried about how people would react to her, but it seems like the response has been positive so far! Again, thanks a million for this wonderful comment ♥.

[whenisitmyturn]

beautifully done! i am semi-new to the fanfic realm and i really loved this. :) keep it up!!

[momentmusical]

Thank you so much! And welcome to the wonderful world of fanfiction :D!!

[yavie_namarie]

Absolutely adorable! Instant fave. =D

[momentmusical]

Awww, thank you so much ♥. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!!